
Okay this is my new story called,"The Immortal In Me.." It's about this girl, her name is Lea, who has a ghost hunting father. She lost her mom in a attack of something mysterious. There was no evidence of how she died or who killed her. A few years later, Lea and her dad move to Colorado. They live in this old ancient house and they suspected it was a normal house to live in. It was a big 2 story house with a garden in the back. What Lea didn't know was that it wss haunted. They lived there for like a few days then one night she saw a woman looking for her child. She saw her and she disappeared. Every night, Lea sees the same woman, a man who is Lea's new neighbor, came by to see the new neighboors. Her father didn't suspect him to be mysterious but Lea saw him different. But what she didn't know was, that the neighboor is actually out to kill her... To find out why, stay tuned to The Immortal In Me!
Hi, I'm Lea Hosenberg. I am 17, my mom died a few days after my 16th birthday. Me and my dad griefed for months then we decided to move to Colorado, my birth place before we moved away when I 6 for my dad to do his ghost hunting job in Pennsylvania. Now we're back, our old house was too old and got torn down so we had to live in a different home. It was cool, it had a beautiful garden in the back. I felt like I was the little girl in Secret Garden when I first walked through there.....
When I first thought of this, I was like it seemed like any other ghost movie but I decided to add a little more twist to it. Some romance, betrayal, thriller, and a little violence. Well, peace and enjoy and you can say it's like The Unvited but it's gonna be different.

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